tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1022880825859700264.post440422911703484984..comments2024-03-21T09:11:45.159-04:00Comments on Bad Girls, Good Guys, and Two-Fisted Action: The Writer Will Take Your Questions Now #275 -- Literary Tellsseanhtaylorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04904457463544311851noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1022880825859700264.post-28967920775613855052013-03-19T13:09:49.852-04:002013-03-19T13:09:49.852-04:00I'm not so conscience of sounds so much, but I...I'm not so conscience of sounds so much, but I blame my comics scripting background for making paragraph breaks so important. I look at whitespace on the page the same as panel gutters. <br /><br />I like to slice off one liners for pacing during an action scene. Instead of describing a pause, I might outright use a -- or ...<br /><br />I employ my fair share of fragments and staccato LR Stahlberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16319072726150487960noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1022880825859700264.post-61120345234050446942013-03-19T12:04:15.105-04:002013-03-19T12:04:15.105-04:00I'm sure I have some but I wouldn't have a...I'm sure I have some but I wouldn't have any idea what. Other than I like In medias res a lot. John Morgan "Bat" Nealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05326723948741489582noreply@blogger.com