Watch your pacing.
Let a fight have a
dance and flow. Let
a moment of passion
vary from slow to fast.
Let the scent of baked
macaroni and cheese
linger in the reader’s
nose then chop off
into short wisps of
scent with sentence
fragments. Let form
meet function.
Let a fight have a
dance and flow. Let
a moment of passion
vary from slow to fast.
Let the scent of baked
macaroni and cheese
linger in the reader’s
nose then chop off
into short wisps of
scent with sentence
fragments. Let form
meet function.
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