Showing posts with label my first story. Show all posts
Showing posts with label my first story. Show all posts

Monday, June 22, 2015

The Writer Will Take Your Questions Now #328 -- It's Elementary

When did you write your first story and how old were you?

If I remember correctly (after all, it was a long time ago), I wrote my story in elementary school as an assignment. I want to say it was either fourth or fifth grade. But I do remember the story. It was an absolutely awful super hero story that barely made it to the back of the handwritten, wide-ruled page torn out of a wire notebook and handed in.

It was full of every comic book cliche I could cram into 250 or so words. But it was a start. And like all starts, it was a crucial first step.

(For the record, I think I made a B- on it.)

Monday, May 18, 2015

The Writer Will Take Your Questions Now #324 -- "A Lifetime of Seconds"

What inspired you to write your first story?


My absolutely first story was for an assignment in high school, so I'm pretty sure my inspiration for that one came from the need to get a good grade.

My first real story that I wrote, i.e., my first faltering steps toward becoming a writer, was inspired by John Donne's "Death Be Not Proud." I wanted to write a sci-fi tale that talked about the beauty of life as only death can reveal it. So I did. And I titled it "A Lifetime of Seconds."

It's about a man's whose job is to chronicle the last weeks of terminal patients for study later. His latest assignment is a girl out of place in her world, more attuned to the world of romantic poets and philosophical/religious thought. As he falls in love with her, she teaches him about the grace of being ready to die and embrace what comes next.

Looking back, it's not a very good story. Not only is it way overwritten, but it's quite heavy-handed in terms of religious thought about the soul, and it can get a bit preachy at times. However, at it's core, I still really enjoy the nugget of the story. Maybe one day I'll come back to it and revise it in light of all I've learned about storytelling since then.